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Open Poetry #33

movement at night.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-10-06 12:15 PM

the lights of the C-train station
remind me of an airport
the worn floors tell a tale
past travalers
these trains
these memories
the world of movement
it's so familiar
darting lights
voices from far away
these trains
these memories
the need to move
to be free
i'll share the dream with you
it's dark out
and the city lights are glaring me in the eyes
telling me of busier times
these trains
these memories

*side note* in case you dont know,C-trains are like above ground subways.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-10-06 11:36 AM

This brought memories back when I used the train and your poem caught the atmosphere very well.

I enjoyed this read.

Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-10-06 02:12 PM

Chelsea~
I felt tremendous movement in your words~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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