Open Poetry #33 |
I Wish Someone |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I wish someone would write for me words that take my breathe away or words that speak to the friendship we share. I wish someone would think of me in something more than a passing glance an idle moment of "I wonder where" or " have you seen?" I wish someone would comfort me when I sink so low I can barely see the next days dawning bright and clear and things will get better. I wish someone would laugh with me over misspelled words and upside down pictures with their head close to mine and our breath intermingled. I wish someone would write for me. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, what a lovely thought Hold out for that special one, don't accept just anyone who comes along...adding compatibility to your list...both thinking and feeling the same about things... You will indeed have lots to share...give, and receive...hugs...Lee J. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i truly know and understand this one i embrace you with my spirits wings my soul to you a song he sings a hug from my heart and a smile before i depart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I would write of sunlight for you of sharing words between friends so true, I would write of happy things and the wishes of happiness life can bring.. I would share these things with you a friend found here in these pages of blue. Hugs! Lovely write! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really very touching. Maree P.S I am going to add it to my library. cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i guess i dont count even though i wrote for ya One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling...you expressed it better than I ever could. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I truly believe that when wish turns into desire things begin to happen...choices are very important at that time...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep...me too... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LeeJ...thank you for the tender thoughts MGROVES...thank you and I do appreaciate the poem. Gentle Spirit...your thoughts and words touched me...thank you Dark Angel...thank you for adding this to your librasy that means a lot to me. passing shadows...I truly thought you might Son of my heart...you more than any one mean more to me than just words can say. Don't count? You are about all that does count!!!! Enchantress...more than you can express? You write beautifully friend. James...thanks friend SEA...back at ya |
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