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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2004-10-05 01:22 PM



I wish someone would write for me
words that take my breathe away
or words that speak to the friendship
we share.

I wish someone would think of me
in something more than a passing glance
an idle moment of "I wonder where"
or " have you seen?"

I wish someone would comfort me
when I sink so low I can barely see
the next days dawning bright and clear
and things will get better.

I wish someone would laugh with me
over misspelled words and upside down pictures
with their head close to mine
and our breath intermingled.

I wish someone would write for me.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2004-10-05 01:30 PM


well, what a lovely thought

Hold out for that special one, don't accept just anyone who comes along...adding compatibility to your list...both thinking and feeling the same about things...
You will indeed have lots to share...give, and receive...hugs...Lee J.

MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-10-05 02:00 PM


i truly know and understand this one


i embrace you with my spirits wings
my soul to you a song he sings
a hug from my heart
and a smile before i depart


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2004-10-05 02:13 PM


I would write of sunlight for you
of sharing words between friends so true,
I would write of happy things
and the wishes of happiness life can bring..

I would share these things with you
a friend found here in these pages of blue.

Hugs!

Lovely write!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-10-05 04:38 PM


This is really very touching.



Maree

P.S I am going to add it to my library.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-10-05 05:39 PM


understanding this
Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2004-10-05 06:28 PM


i guess i dont count even though i wrote for ya

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-10-05 07:12 PM


I know this feeling...you expressed it better than I ever could.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-10-05 07:19 PM


I truly believe that when wish turns into desire things begin to happen...choices are very important at that time...James
SEA
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with you
9 posted 2004-10-06 12:17 PM


yep...me too...

Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2004-10-06 01:16 PM


LeeJ...thank you for the tender thoughts
MGROVES...thank you and I do appreaciate the poem.
Gentle Spirit...your thoughts and words touched me...thank you
Dark Angel...thank you for adding this to your librasy that means a lot to me.
passing shadows...I truly thought you might
Son of my heart...you more than any one mean more to me than just words can say.
Don't count? You are about all that does count!!!!
Enchantress...more than you can express? You write beautifully friend.
James...thanks friend
SEA...back at ya

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