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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-10-05 07:28 PM


Embraced In the
Warmth of the Moon


Late at night I watch the moon
shining bright and the shadows
moving about as if playing a tune.
Then a romantic mood comes over me,
I feel captured and I feel set free,
embraced in the warmth of the moon.


JamesLee
October05
2004

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-10-05 07:34 PM


Beautiful James...love the way the moon makes me feel too.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2004-10-05 07:39 PM


"I feel captured and I feel set free,"
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Now that is a way cool line.  I know what you mean but dang never tried to pen it.  Very nice read.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-10-05 08:37 PM


it's a nice feeling, being captured by the moon.

Nice one James

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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