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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-10-03 10:10 PM


If We Were Married

Perhaps I'd wake up in the morning
and she'd be rubbing my back, and
as I felt the softness of her touch,
I'd feel like she cared for me,
like she loved me, and then her
sweet voice would whisper in my ear
the words I long to hear, softly but
crystal clear, "Good morning honey,
I love you."

JamesLee
October03
2004

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-10-03 10:16 PM


Sounds like a wonderful way to wake up in the morning Jammes.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-10-03 10:29 PM


You softy you - romantic and desirable, yes this picture you paint.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2004-10-03 10:34 PM


Believe in dreams my friend   

enjoyed...

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2004-10-04 04:24 AM


so love your work James! enjoyed Bello!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2004-10-05 07:15 PM


Thank you Enchantress, Susan, dgvarner and Roniece for the nice responses...James
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