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Open Poetry #33

To Hold My Hand

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-10-05 12:38 PM

To Hold My Hand

If you truly
love someone
you want to
be with them.

Don't tell me you
care for me unless
this is a principle
that you understand

and don't say that
you love me unless
you have the desire
and the time to
hold my hand.

JamesLee
October05
2004

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-10-05 12:42 PM

and a very lucky lady she would be, to get to hold your hand

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2004-10-05 02:25 AM

ah James, this is a lovely write! I will hold your hand Bello any day!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2004-10-05 02:52 AM

I feel this. Lovely writing

and then He created the horse...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-10-05 04:30 AM

Nicely said James

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-10-05 01:47 PM

very lucky

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-10-05 04:43 PM

Very very nicely penned dear James.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2004-10-05 05:29 PM

"
and don't say that
you love me unless
you have the desire
and the time to
hold my hand."
*****************

That verse alone says it all. Very nice.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-10-05 05:36 PM

true that!

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