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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-10-05 12:38 PM


To Hold My Hand

If you truly
love someone
you want to
be with them.

Don't tell me you
care for me unless
this is a principle
that you understand

and don't say that
you love me unless
you have the desire
and the time to
hold my hand.

JamesLee
October05
2004

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with you
1 posted 2004-10-05 12:42 PM


and a very lucky lady she would be, to get to hold your hand
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2004-10-05 02:25 AM


ah James, this is a lovely write!  I will hold your hand Bello any day!
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3 posted 2004-10-05 02:52 AM


I feel this. Lovely writing

and then He created the horse...

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4 posted 2004-10-05 04:30 AM


Nicely said James

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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5 posted 2004-10-05 01:47 PM


very lucky


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6 posted 2004-10-05 04:43 PM


Very very nicely penned dear James.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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7 posted 2004-10-05 05:29 PM


"
and don't say that
you love me unless
you have the desire
and the time to
hold my hand."
*****************

That verse alone says it all.  Very nice.

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8 posted 2004-10-05 05:36 PM


true that!
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