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exhale
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0 posted 2004-10-04 03:31 PM


the sky lights up with her tears
as she soars through the sky
her hair is the milky way
and her voice the moon

can you say you don't need her.

voices through the galaxy
words like arrows
a broken heart is all the world see's
tragedy for the lifeless
the spark is gone

can you say you don't need her.

the open heart is broken
and trust is a weapon
the world will never be the same
were you need to cry to be heard
and bleed like theres no tomorrow

can you say you don't need her.

[This message has been edited by exhale (10-05-2004 12:15 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-10-04 06:02 PM


Some great imagery!

This mysterious SHE is suffering, but we need her.

Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-10-06 07:39 AM


how sad, yet i understand the broken heart, and the tears that cant seem to wash away the pain


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