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Two People
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Two People |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Two People Two people Alone in a bed Two lives Held by a thread Two faces Lined by fate Two hearts Twisted with hate Two souls Searching for meaning Two people Lost in the screaming Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
A straight shot...taking this reader into the frenzy! Very Good! Robert Joseph |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! Well done!! powerful write, much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A straight forward thrust - good parry. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup, straight down the line. Powerful. Great stuff.  cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One person gone...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this write |
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