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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-10-04 07:31 AM

The Edge of Night

I seem to sail the edge of night
Desires wind is much too light
The doldrums seem to hold the ship
Within a mindless vacant grip

Floating in a glassy sea
With darkness over taking me
I live within a shadows frail
With naught of gleams of some how bail

Drifting in a gloom of edge
I see a pile of moments dredge
Waiting on the beach of time
In the form of dust and grime

And though there is no wind per say
I drift into this gloomy bay
A phantom in a fantasy
Reaching for eternity

It is the soup within my bowl
I sip each day to feed my soul

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2004-10-04 07:45 AM

ah you weave an imagery of delight! enjoyed!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-10-04 07:48 AM

So needed this, hearty meaty soup
this was sir...thank you

Morning

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-10-04 07:54 AM

Sure hope that is a cream soup, Sy...looks like for me [sitting here in CA] that my home-town weather is getting fallishly cooler...

So I will continue to soak up some CA fog and fun and sun [when it decides to peak through the clouds] for another week...and will be popping in and out as I can to catch up on all of our poets' wonderful poetry!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-10-04 08:10 AM

Roniece,
Thank you so much.

LeeJ
Good morning sweety.

Sunshine
Thanks for the wonderful.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-10-04 08:43 AM

Oh how I enjoy waking up and reading your words!
Another wonderful write sy!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2004-10-04 08:44 AM

Well done Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-10-04 10:43 AM

Nancy,
Hugs back and thank you.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-10-04 02:39 PM

My goodness, if that sort of soup feeds your soul, then you've just got to take a sip of mine! It'll cure what ails ya and put the spark back into your plugs!It's full of spice and life! lol

A big steaming pot from Hell's, I mean, Heaven's, kitchen is on the way! Hope yer hungry!

EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-04-2004 04:44 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-10-04 05:57 PM

quote:
And though there is no wind per say
I drift into this gloomy bay
A phantom in a fantasy
Reaching for eternity

Wow, dear Seymour, I especially love the above lines ... you feed your soul beautifully ....

Your - out of time - morning coffee!!

psssst - here it is EXACTLY 0.00 ... midnight ....
alias "the Edge of Night".

Plunging into the night's embrace .... reaching reaching ....
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2004-10-04 06:54 PM

Margherita
Enjoyed your reply so much, thank you.

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