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leaves on my doorstep
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leaves on my doorstep |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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time shifts again ...and again the stars are out in full tonight the moon just floating along ...i can only imagine to be on the moon looking at the earth as the fall is here now winter is fast frosting then the snow ....the arctic air canada air cold breaths cloaks the northern tipped fingers of the mitt hidden hearts underneath thick coats beat warm within the cream tone skin when the past remembers us the way we were then something calls in the southern winds feathers of the flock that flew away every years the same ...nests to make on the island beaches birds are brighter than my cold hands leaves on my doorstep greeting me with gold and crimson have hope they say to me as they blow away JWIII 10/03/04 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
what a wonderful visual you have created - very much enjoyed your work! Bravo Bello! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your poem is just absolutely exquisite and I quickly clicked to keep it in my library .... the soft melancholy and then the uplifting message of hope in the end. Touched me deeply. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great to read you again! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
greeting me with gold and crimson have hope they say to me as they blow away ..only a bunch of leaves or are theY? amazing in what they show us. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"when the past remembers us the way we were then something calls in the southern winds feathers of the flock that flew away " this is fantastic...  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have described our common understanding so perfectly here JW. What a beautiful piece of writing...and how lucky we are. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
AW "have hope they say to me as they blow away" Great ending! Enjoyed the scene and the feelings painted. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Aujussy, what a wonderful write! I enjoyed these blowing leaves on this warm fall morning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ How beautiful these heart-words are~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you're trying to make me jealous aren't you handsome. (notice there's no "?" lol) loving this so much!!! S~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James, when the past remembers us the way we were then it seems as if this time of year brings us back . . . always love reading you . . . lw |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
WOW lol , what a cool bunch of people here , thanks alll of you ...the leaves tend to bring up a little past in everything ... sooooo sweet the remarks rocked my day today and will for the rest of time ... many hugs and much love ~James W |
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