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Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

0 posted 2004-10-02 09:08 AM

Tutor Me

In full voice
speak to me
(aesthetic illumination)
of the heart's engaging glory

Utter each phrase
with thunderous expulsion
captivating and arresting
my regard for sound -
save the wonder of your appeal

Tutor me -
to follow nothing
but the unrivaled persuasions
your lips were formed to tremble

In their quake
I will find my tongue -
returning in kind
a new wealth of inspiration
for you to explore

Robert Joseph
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-10-02 09:17 AM

Speak your heart in it's glorious cascade,
That I may respond
With a flood of my own passion...

Striking write.
TD

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-10-02 02:52 PM

wow....

good thing i don't use sugar in my coffee or i'd be on serious overload at the moment..
this is very much, you.

me

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2004-10-02 02:54 PM

ok... and... so i figure since you already know i'm a brat.. i'm wondering..

where does one sign up to be a tutor like that?

*smirk* couldn't help it. sorry. :-)

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-10-03 01:12 PM

nuff said

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

5 posted 2004-10-03 01:57 PM

TD, Thanks so much...I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this one.

Snow, Thanks for the "wow" I truly appreciate your time in replying. *not sure about the tutoring*

Robert Joseph

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-10-03 02:28 PM

A stirring, inspired write and very beautifully done!

Love, Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-10-03 03:55 PM

Mmmmm, yes, I like the feel of this one -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2004-10-04 03:39 AM

you write with style Robert Joseph! enjoyed!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

9 posted 2004-10-04 07:06 PM

Margherita, Susan, & Roniece

Thanks for taking a look, I appreciate your remarks.

Robert Joseph

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