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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-01 08:07 AM


morning brings you flowers
in thought vases
and your lady skin
says she is anxious

you contimplate the dawning
and then draw circles
on imaginary windows
you write poems there

in the vapor of your breath
and taste the ends
of your finger pens
to see how sighs sound

I watch you circle your wrist
with your fingers
and press them firmly
taking the pulse of imagination

then you smile and shiver
I see mischief in your eyes
and ask what you are thinking
you look inside my mind then

and say it is hard to talk about
__________

Dark


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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-01 08:12 AM


then you smile and shiver
I see mischief in your eyes
and ask what you are thinking
you look inside my mind then

and say it is hard to talk about


LOL....betcha I could talk for hours DS!  lmao...
happy friday bros....good to see your shine here this morning.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-10-01 08:52 AM


you the MAN
bow...bow
to the master of seduction...

tastyyy...

K

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-01 08:57 AM


he he....

Sounds like your describing a "real" women!
Big smiles and best wishes with her!!!!
Your a lucky guy!

Hiya and Good Morning
Wishing you a great day!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-10-01 09:04 AM


"then you smile and shiver
I see mischief in your eyes
and ask what you are thinking
you look inside my mind then

and say it is hard to talk about"

Heh heh...yup..some things are best left to the imagination.
Excellent start to my Friday Dark.
Have a great day!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-10-01 10:10 AM


Mmmmmm - lovely this - thought vases of flowers - beautiful.  You do weave magic with your words -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
6 posted 2004-10-01 10:16 AM


"in the vapor of your breath
and taste the ends
of your finger pens
to see how sighs sound"

Now that is a sexy stanza.


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
7 posted 2004-10-01 11:15 AM


Whoa!
Sounds steamy in a gentle soft way.
Beautiful.
BonBon

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
8 posted 2004-10-01 09:58 PM


DS

"then you smile and shiver
I see mischief in your eyes
and ask what you are thinking
you look inside my mind then

and say it is hard to talk about"

This sounds familiar.     
__________

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-10-06 02:01 AM


Now, darn.. how did I miss this'un?

Always a pleasure to um read you MrD

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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