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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-10-04 01:11 AM







Soon Love's Music

In the sky heavens, far away distant, aloft
hands float and touch and meld, sweet, soft
keys of cream ivory, keys of ebony, too
music of piano floats, soft, supple, new…

~*~

How does the musician then imagine a tune
how does a soloist know when to croon ~
perhaps, in the sortilege of a summer day
that comes one instant ahead of soon…

~*~

To hold that twinkling in concerto's tone
or to grasp with emphasis, impetus' own,
as to know a love in the nucleus of a noon
when that day comes just ahead of soon…

~*~

And whether in this sheer, a mystical quality
dwelling under the sun, in the heart of me,
that, if confessed in one word of poetry
would bring you then ahead of soon to me…

~*~

For I perceive you in cream of ivories
as you fathom to possess the key of me
as the pass to poetry should in all reality
be delicate as the love you bring soon to we…


~*~

01.14.01
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Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-04-2004 07:11 AM).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2004-10-04 01:20 AM


Karilea,
Will I haven't seen it before, so bless you for the favor. I know a little of the ivories so find this one pretty special. Thanks.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2004-10-04 01:38 AM


Nothing quite like the piano when played by a master - and what greater inspiration than love -

this was lovely

Susan

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3 posted 2004-10-04 03:02 AM


How beautiful, Karilea. It was music to
my mind. Thank you.
Hugs,
Ethel

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4 posted 2004-10-04 04:40 AM


Thank you for the repost Karilea, I believe I missed it the first time.

You played a beautiful tune here m'friend.

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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5 posted 2004-10-04 09:29 AM


A beautiful tune is worth repeating..
Lovely this...lovely you.
Hope you are enjoying your vacation.
~Missing you hugs, hip-sis~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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6 posted 2004-10-04 09:29 AM


It isn't the end of the journey at all....it's only the stops along the way that count.

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Lots more notes in you, m'lady! When you hear this piano played for your ears alone, you'll definitely know.

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vandana
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7 posted 2004-10-04 10:40 AM


liked it a lot
Martie
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8 posted 2004-10-04 01:02 PM


Karilea

You play heart-strings so very well!  

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9 posted 2004-10-04 02:08 PM


Beautiful tunes lady...
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10 posted 2004-10-04 02:45 PM


I enjoyed the "mystical quality" of this beauteous poetic concerto.


Linda

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11 posted 2004-10-04 06:15 PM


Ahh, to be able to produce divine harmony out of the piano interpreting the heart's motions!
Very beautiful, dear Karilea!
Love and Joy.
Margherita

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