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Red Moon Rising
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Red Moon Rising |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 STOP SHORT#6: Red Moon Rising *a chinese tsa-yen longing for your arms, as Night ...holds Moon her shy blush, clay_staining Morning's breath there's hunger 'neath your gaze and slow rise to curl ... into Today's womb ©sdt'04 "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Breathtaking - words and visuals combine to stunning effect. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I'd have to agree with Susan. Very good piece, enjoyed the read. :-) |
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klm Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 58New Orleans, Atlanta |
this is one of the more engaging pieces i have ever read; your talent shines. your use of language allows one to envision various scenarios. kenneth The true poet writes to express, not impress. [This message has been edited by klm (10-03-2004 09:55 PM).] |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
there's a man??? :::: gasp :::: hmmm..... darlin' i write because i love words. not always because there is a "someone" :-) thank you all very much!!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Fantastic! Very enjoyable read  and then He created the horse... |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
~S~ Youv've done it again, another gift for your readers...boundless rewards for the soul's eyes and ears. Robert Joseph |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe of you... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi dear. I love this. I am inflicting a lot of pain on myself just to peak at this tonight. I threw my back out at work last Friday. Been bed ridden since then on medication. Had to write though...just to say I seen this and loved it. Now I am headed bacck to bed...just as soon as I take some more medicine. Hugs...me. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...very nice...in this style I would like to write a book...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..that's cool! much enjoyed hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Spectacular .... you leave this reader almost speechless ..... huggles, Marti |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadySnow~ You simply wrap the prettiest thoughts in such gorgeous word-paper~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok, I'm hooked. If I see your name, I gotta click on it.... everything you write leaves me in awe... this is no exception to that rule... still shakin me head wonderin how you do it....grinz... Very well done... |
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