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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-10-02 11:11 PM

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                                        d
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                         a

even the sky

                 cant hold you now

t a p p
                                  the golden embers
that driZZle from a dy
                                ing star,

the palm  r e le a s e  of one thousand ivory doves

separate the RED poinsetta
from novembers killing frost

don a parasol

(un )      chain the albatross

c
    urtsy
to the king of all hidden         TRUTHS

from
me

to
you

an offering..............

this sol itary leaff

fresh with paint
on its virgin voyage

  across

christened in a
                  s
                   e
                     a

                          of spontaneity

please dont trample

u
p
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n

its
        un

           taint

               ed



heart

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-04-2004 10:57 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-10-03 12:11 PM

words floating
just the way a leaf falls

love this

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2004-10-03 01:57 AM

very cool inked

liked the afterglow
~J

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-10-03 04:57 AM

B e a u t i f u l!

To dance along with the leaf....

Exquisitely charming.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-10-03 04:59 AM

oh .... I forgot to say how great the leaf form!
you are so delightfully creative .....

baci
M

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

5 posted 2004-10-04 05:56 PM

Outstanding display. Made one read nice and slow. Which revealed all written intentions. Great pen here.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-10-04 07:18 PM

Oh how lovely Michele!
This softly floats down the page just like a leaf.
Love the presentation.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-10-04 07:48 PM

thanks for taking the ride

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2004-10-04 08:42 PM

OH MY GOD this is amazing! You know just yesterday I was in Borders reading Plath,
thinking of you and smiling because she was a pioneer, Michele, as you very well know.

*grin*

The beat daddies would be proud of this, I am.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

9 posted 2004-10-04 08:56 PM

Oh, I love this style...motion in poetry
e.e.cummings would like this one...:-)
enjoyable form and content
---------ice/ford
><>

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2004-10-04 09:00 PM

As always, your stunning view of the world lifts me, and I float in the golden trails of September ribbons.

Happy F
       A
        L
         L

TD

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2004-10-04 10:28 PM

Sweet write Mish, one thing? untained should be untainted no?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2004-10-04 10:56 PM

thanks kids
yes raffi
im going to fix

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

13 posted 2004-10-06 05:04 PM

very nice....i can feel myself falling too....please someone catch me!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2004-10-06 05:23 PM

a pleasuer to see u here

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