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this is nothing sudden
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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this is nothing sudden my eyelids twinge to close like the drag of setting sun to carry in my hands the deep midnight of you I hold you gently as if to crumble like autumn in leaf this is nothing sudden as you circle me like the sea and I dream you into waves that strike at my breast you’ve made your way heavily and I have moored you with permanent anchors with chains, umbilicus banging at you like a drowning fish full of waves, full of wet sand and how you will suffer in getting accustomed to me cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows ~ani difranco~ |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
awesome write...very talented girl you are |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this is nothing sudden my eyelids twinge to close like the drag of setting sun to carry in my hands the deep midnight of you I hold you gently as if to crumble like autumn in leaf this is nothing sudden as you circle me like the sea and I dream you into waves that strike at my breast you’ve made your way heavily and I have moored you with permanent anchors with chains, umbilicus banging at you like a drowning fish full of waves, full of wet sand and how you will suffer in getting accustomed to me ~*~ 8,000 posts...something sudden[ly] happens...Magic... this is a good way, after having spent a few days away from Passions, to check in...and feel something like awe... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
you have this way of constructing a solid piece of writing wherein your word choices and their combinations or absences feel so brave and heavy with surety. so glad to be reading these of you. here. ~a. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"and how you will suffer in getting accustomed to me" I love these words  Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing and then He created the horse... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Maree Leave it to Karilea to notice that 8000! Contrats to you...I love your poetry, you know that, and also so happy when I get a reply from you.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always love your words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
As beautiful as its author and subject mwuah bella  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Suffer.....no, I have a feeling that word might not be just right, when it comes to getting used to you! |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Nothing sudden, indeed..... Making love was never described as well..... brings to mind Hemmingway's Islands in the Stream. Billy 8) |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Maree, Beautiful in every way. Your writes always move me. The have such depth and such power. I am always excited to read your posts. The have a certain "odd-couple" mixture of both elegance and gritty-ness to them that I shall not tire of. Your poetry is always something I wish I had on my shelf - printed and perfectly bound. Always impressed, Big K |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The more I read of you, the more amazed am I. If this is suffering, torture me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the changes of the tides of a woman are more than just a moon they are the minutes of the ages each a poem well done ms maree |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wondermous as always hugsnstuff JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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