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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-10-02 10:36 AM




  

love every second

as it slips away

secrets  into the nothing  

the ever

lost in a heater vent

a ring of truth

just beyond my grasp

reaching through

dusty diamonds

dreaming of another life

she gave me light

in a dark world





JdWIII

10-02-04

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1 posted 2004-10-02 11:33 AM


loved this!
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2 posted 2004-10-02 11:44 AM


Loved this too.
TD

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3 posted 2004-10-02 12:16 PM


ahh the shard shines on
this was based on my dream
and a jewel that was with me
then sliping out of my grasp as
i awakened without her
ahhh
the shards of light dance so bright
through the window of your heart
..............
latttaaa ......
and much love back to you
~j w

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4 posted 2004-10-02 01:17 PM


beautiful expression of love.....wow soft and tender!

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

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5 posted 2004-10-02 01:34 PM


thanks greens
love for a dream
love of a wish that comes true
love for love to come back
~wolfy

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6 posted 2004-10-02 04:34 PM


Love this Mr Wolf

Please, keep em coming.

Maree

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

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7 posted 2004-10-02 04:41 PM


God, James,

you write with this weightless beauty
that leaves me with such calm . . .

aujussy wolf
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8 posted 2004-10-02 05:31 PM


angel , your wish is my command
...i will do my best fine lady
thanks m
....
.....
.......
and lilwing .,
weightless ahhh nice word
at times i wish i was
a bird and could fly
thanks lw


lotta love too ~J

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9 posted 2004-10-02 05:42 PM


So very hard to grasp the wisps of dreams sometimes with liquid hands.  

Very cool write.  Much enjoyed and will look for more of yours.  Lot's of passion in this piece

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10 posted 2004-10-02 05:53 PM


so true mark , thanks
for the good words
~JW

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