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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
I cant really say much about this poem though i do think its one of my more rushed poems yet i cant find the right words to say and this is what i came up with soon as i opned my jounral. I guess i could say this is dedicated to my dog who passed away today and we only got him last christmas eve. I will right a better version later if i can stop crying enough... I sigh and I sit down in the arm chair And wish you would come to me again I look to the side where your bed used to lie And know you will be lying there no more To put you down was the best we could do So you were in no more pain You might be out of your pain right now But mine has just started a new I cant help but let the tears fall And wish that there was an easier way To tell you how much I loved you, you see But I know you knew that still Cancer was what ended your life We couldn’t operate since it was to bad We wished and we hoped and prayed to god But it was no help in the end Silence now falls over this house of mine While I sit here thinking of you You were my best friend no matter what And I will love you till the end |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am so sorry for the loss of your pet dog Alicia. I have known this loss and it feels terrible. You wrote of your feelings well. Heart hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
that's tough...I hope you have lots of good memories to hold on to. |
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