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msrascalx Junior Member
since 2004-09-25
Posts 15Conway, SC |
This is dedicated to Jeff "rascalx". --------------------------------------------------- Heaven I spent the night in heaven and woke up in your arms feeling love I've never known before indulging in your charm You take the love I give you and make each moment shared so special and fulfilling like no-one ever dared each day I am with you I feel a new desire that warms the very soul of me like a softly burning fire but still it's not the passion that makes me love you so it's all the joy you have given me that few will ever know |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vickie~ This is just such a lovely piece~ I'm sure Jeff is as happy as you are~ Heartfelt penning~  Welcome to PiP~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice, a warm tender love poem you've written to honor your mate. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is such a lovely piece for Jeff.. I am sure he will love it..I know I do! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I'm sure I'm incredibly biased when it comes to any poetry that you have written for or about me   so I'll just say "Thank you"  and that this poem is one of my favorites of yours. - Jeff |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Awesome place to spend the night -- in Heaven!! carry on... hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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