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Electric Vision |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
We spiralled thin white connectors aimlessly into the light dark blue to flicker and spark as we propelled elements to connect Blinded by a sun in rays hitting our protection we held the spasm echoing vibration through our gloves and heat turned to vision Swaying we watched as connections made and broke sparking light echo a blinding sky of electric vision defying our desire |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow, ouch, I got a shock just reading this... grinning, very much enjoyed this vision, this charge of togetherness...the connection in all...very well done sir |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks LeeJ Maybe more than I thought to write, but safety in space Dave |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Swaying we watched as connections made and broke sparking light echo a blinding sky of electric vision defying our desire extremlly enjoyed this peice,well written  |
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