Open Poetry #33 |
Flowers And Tears |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Today I sat visiting with you for awhile, I talked about all the things that have happened since you have been gone. You listened as you always have. I was quiet as I heard your words of wisdom come to me once again, enduring through time.... I told you how much pain there has been since you have been gone, how so much has changed since you have been gone. As the wind blew I felt your fingers touch my face, I heard you say be strong, do not cry. I smiled, said Thank You for always being here, for always being the one I can count on. I stood up to leave although I wanted to stay longer. Thank you for the memories I treasure, I said as a tear fell from my eyes and I kissed the flowers laying them on your grave saying Daddy, I love you.... {I still miss you Dad...Happy Birthday...} The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, sweet Donna, this touches me deeply. Yes we can count on them, always! Wonderful write, the love you share is profoundly felt. There are surely adequate celebrations "up there". Your love the gift. Thank you. Love, Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Donna, This touches me. I lost my Dad when I was ninteen. Birthdays and holidays were really tough, but now I'm able to smile and laugh at some of our corny memories. The pain is no longer, but has been replaced by peace. Over time, that'll come to you, Sweet Donna. Meanwhile, I'm wishing you well. cathy/miscellanea |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know the feeling Donna... was just there last week... and this coming week would have been my sister's 62nd birthday~ hugs M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Soooooooo very gently touching is this~ I have those memoried treks to make within the next week~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You've catured the color of miracle, faith, and the great gifts which purrs thorugh our souls, bittersweet write my friend....hugs |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
You've catured the color of miracle, faith, and the great gifts which purrs thorugh our souls, bittersweet write my friend....hugs |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow Aunt Donna...This was awesome, I forgot today was his birthday....Thanks for reminding me... "I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I felt that one Dave |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone. Stac, actually it was Monday but I just posted this today....an old repost but still means the same to me. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv you hearthugssss I know the ache.... ~~*~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I feel the ache in this Donna..... Heart Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and the tears will water the flowers and the flowers glisten like jewels holding their tears upon their petals and your dad will know you love him |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have given the reflection of wisdom taught and wisdom learned along with compassion as well. Touching poem and full of heart. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww Donna, rest assured knowing he is far better of than we are . . . This is lovely. |
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