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Open Poetry #33

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-29 03:11 AM

Better

I remember better
it was
a blackberry time
and the thing
that stained you
was sweet

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-09-29 05:11 AM

Oooh I reallyyyy like this slick_lady

Maree

Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-09-29 05:43 AM

you always say so much with so few words

love that about you

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-10-02 11:11 AM

Ooh....tasty! I'll bet it was exactly that!

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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-10-02 03:30 PM

Excellent write Helen!

Eric

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-10-02 07:00 PM

OH, this is amazing, Helen!

perfect!

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