Open Poetry #33 |
A sonnet whine |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A Sonnet Whine I wish that I could write a lovely sonnet, With words that flowed from out my bald pate bonnet. I’d sit and think and write good words of rhyming, And savor syllables to get good timing. I’d write of love so sweet to win a sweetie. Who’d take me in her arms without entreaty. With flowers, poems and words so well endearing, In fact, I’d kindle up a love quite searing. It grieves me so to read pip’s other writing From those who coin their offerings exciting. The tender poignancy of hearts entwining Gives pain to me whose only gift is whining. But labor I within my wretched squalor. If all you like is rhyming, give a holler. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*chuckling here* methinks you underestimate your writing talents |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I wish I could rhyme.. But I do have an awful time! Keep on writing Ken..I love your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ken There are few better attributes then a sense of humor! Enjoyed this sonnet whine! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
In Oregon we're quaky Which makes my writing shaky 'Tis kind of you to call I really thank you all. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Taking I believe The Sonic Mickey And rightly so Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is, dear Sir, a poetic endeavor to write of love and of forever and I know that my meter...stinks... but still I know just what you think of those who write and rhyme so pure... that within blue walls, they will endure... but it is your pen that writes the wit that is; and keeps us coming back, exclaiming, gee, whiz! For I am one who would share your talents, while remaining, sir, not quite as gallant... but albeit, what you say is true... there are so many who dwell in the blue that all would emulate such poets, true... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I love rhyming!!! But I know how you feel.... ~sky So you go and make it happen |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A Sonnet Wine, aged and very tasty Grinning, very well done! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
oh gosh if i could rhyme half as good as you this would be the part were i mkae a witty comment about this little sonnet but since my rhyming skills are in the drains,i'll just say this was extremly entertaining and funny funny funny,weeellll written |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the giggle tonight...it was much needed |
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