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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-29 12:27 PM


Moments...


In a silly moment
I thought that you
really did love me,
and then I remembered
that it was I who loved you,
and in my heart I wanted you
to love me too, and even though
we have our moments, I find it
hard to believe that you do.


JamesLee
September28
2004


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MGROVES
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lovely
you always make me smile


Margherita
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2 posted 2004-09-29 06:20 AM


This word play is quite cute ....dear James!

.... try the Daisy petals if you need a confirmation of the verdict!

Love, Margherita


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-09-30 12:12 PM


Thank you MGROVES and Margeherita...and then there were the doubts...I always find it hard to believe that someone loves me...those words can mean so much or so little to someone...James
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