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kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

0 posted 2004-09-28 11:04 AM

Autumn Strands

Strands of morning light
Reflections of Autumn day
On the spider's strands

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-28 11:19 AM

Beautiful Ken, I can see the images in my mind. Vivid imagery!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-09-28 12:12 PM

Nicely woven, Ken.
I always enjoy seeing the way sunlight beams dance on the spider's web.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-09-28 12:29 PM

Nice imagery. Is there anything more amazing than seeing the subtle shades and brilliant sparkles of the spiders web especially in the morning, moistened by dew?

Enjoyed!
miscellanea

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-09-28 12:33 PM

Very beautiful imagery.

Recently I have spent quite some time "exploring" all the spiderwebs in my daughter's garden. Simply amazing!

Love, Margherita

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2004-09-28 12:35 PM

Comments of poets
Incandescent their sharing
Bring glowing feelings

Thanks to each of you. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-09-28 12:39 PM

Liked it

I recently had to wait for a spider crossing the face flannel before I could use it

They tuck themselves away behind my wing mirrow and see to survive everything no matter what

Nicely defined sharp

Yes

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-09-28 12:53 PM

Very nicely penned
Much enjoyed the images
Smiles and Hugs, Nancy

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

8 posted 2004-09-28 02:16 PM

I don't like spiders too much, but this was a beautiful haiku, kayjay!

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-09-28 03:02 PM

and there is a kiss of dew wrapping the web, imatating an atmosphere of miniture neon sparkling light...

what image you have projected...lovely

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

10 posted 2004-09-28 06:05 PM

None write on islands
With neither praise nor comment
All who visit, warm.

Thanks to all for the kind remarks.

Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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