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Where You Are
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Where You Are |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Where You Are It's much like sunrise; it's clearly undeniable There hanging in a shade of awesome That's where you are; in the center of my divine light Where my new day always finds you And, your warmth is breath taking... It's much like sundown; it fathers my recognition There overhead in a shade of honor That's where you are; in my hour of dusk taking place Where my days end acknowledges you And, eager claims the moment to dream... It's much like the wind; it polishes my awareness There embracing in a shade of unseen That's where you are; in the spirit of natures breath Where in my conscious you ride the breeze And, longing to feel you becomes my fate... It's much like the rain; it gives in to an idle storm There releasing in a shade of relief That's where you are; in my calling for vital waters Where my need for you is delivered And, I thirst no more in your offering... It's much like the seasons; it's an unforgettable beauty There revealing in a shade of itself That's where you are; in it's power to touch all life Where you resemble it's generosity And, looking away is just impossible... It's much like the heavens; it's a gift to our souls There lastingly in a shade of home That's where you are; in it's mercy I hold for all time Where you appear just as it's glory And, loving you is all that I know... Saundra Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Wow, such extreme, and powerful words. Very nice. I most liked the last lines. Very strong, and quite beautiful. Thanks for sharing these words, and I did very much enjoy them. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's much like the wind; it polishes my awareness There embracing in a shade of unseen That's where you are; in the spirit of natures breath Where in my conscious you ride the breeze And, longing to feel you becomes my fate.. How lovely is this, each verse held me in it's warm caress. I so love the way you write, Saunni~ Beautiful, beautiful work. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A pouring from the heart, warm flows of milk and honey. Well done Saundra. TD |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank you, all of you, for taking the time to read this. It means a lot. Sincerely, Sauni Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I almost missed this gentle write. Sauni, the wind will always take your favorite memories, and gift them back to you when you need them most.  Hello, dear friend. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OMG, Saunni, this is really lovely!  ....jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this feels just very complete |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
That's where you are; in my calling for vital waters Where my need for you is delivered And, I thirst no more in your offering... Unfolding in earnest purity...a pleasure to read. Robert Joseph |
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