Open Poetry #33 |
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Fo Love |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA ![]() |
For Love I lived for love and gave love Got none back at all And when there was none to give Found no one there at all And when I reach the end, some day No one will ever recall, One who loved so selflessly But was never loved at all. But on my humble tomb, that day, The epitaph will say it all I chose to love and not be loved Than never to love at all. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely said... Such longing and heartache here.. A well done bittersweet write. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes to give without expectation Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
nicely put |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
anwaar, This is simply beautiful and it will be a "must have" keeper in my library. Although your poem gives the illusion that you unselfishly loved and haven't received love in return, I'd wager to say, you were loved (maybe not by whom you desired at the time, but perhaps by others who you didn't see...) miscellanea |
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