Open Poetry #33 |
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New Meaning |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion ![]() |
What is this feeling I feel? Oh how my head does reel. What is this longing I sense? Past lives from my hands I rinse. This feeling I feel is real, With truth spoken lick the seal. The longing I do is for you, I know you feel it too. With your love given to me, I can now clearly see. I belong right by your side, On clouds we shall glide. You bring new meaning to me, I know not how to make you see. You're the reason I wake up now, Bring me to life this is how. Love me, Never leave me, Believe me, Don't lie to me, An angel that whispered into my ear, All your words I love to hear. YOU...are my new meaning. One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Fist time I have read you. Love the poem...picture of you is way cool too. LOL! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
It is wonderful when one finds love. Just remember, love yourself too, as she loves you - a gift you can give to her. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile here |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Wishing, hoping, praying Liked it Dave |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Do I gotta BEAT it out of you boy-of-mine? Who is this new love for you? |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
thanks everyone....mother you couldnt beat me if ya tried id just stick out my arm and you couldnt reach me anymore :P One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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