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I'll Carry You
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I'll Carry You |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA 
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So you say your day's been long Filled with disappointments here and there Well just remember days come to an end And there's someone here that cares So you say your nights are cold A lonely bed and no one to share In the morning when the sun breaks there will be warmth everywhere So you say your mind is spent Cant think straight or remember a thing There's a song in my heart I'll share with you In harmony we will sing So you say your body's tired Can't take another step, nothing you can do Then let me help you out my dear This time I'll carry you Through your hardest days Through you lonely nights Through your toughest times of despair I'll Carry you So ease your troubled mind and dry your weary eyes Have faith and believe in me And I'll carry you through life Only at night you can see the depth of the sun Sim0riah |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very comforting |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A lot of people should remember this. We forget what we do to others. Dave |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Very nice, very pretty. This could make a great song... "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That is so good! I can see the Lord saying that to me. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Thanks for the nice compliments everyone. I'm glad you like it..Soul drifter I do write music and will have to come up with something for it.. sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My heart can hear the echoes of this playing in the distance...a beautiful song...one my heart can skip a beat to. Love and Hugs ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, this was genuine and so well written, that I wish the entire world could read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~thank you~ M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a very sweet and comforting message miscellanea |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful writing, comforting words. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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