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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-09-27 04:51 PM


flashes.
bronze smiles.
long hands decorating fear.
rightly fevered
empty
two holes
pushed by a head.
words moving freely-
exhausted.
trepidation trapping space.
and the skin is tired
searching for name.
one long try
counting rambles
between one and many.
escape is a lie
gently raised in hide
not to be destroyed by logic.
the time of hysteric cry
is logical.


© Copyright 2004 petre h andonov - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-09-27 05:09 PM


Very powerful write

Dave

steavenr
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2 posted 2004-09-30 01:30 AM


If I said that I understood all of your writes, I would only be deceiving myself...yet I find myself inexplicably drawn to your work...there is always a phrase or two (or more) that simply fascinates me...this time it was:

"long hands decorating fear"

...always a fan...

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
3 posted 2004-09-30 02:27 AM


thank you
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2004-09-30 08:50 AM


nice to read your words again petre
pandonov
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5 posted 2004-10-02 03:23 PM


thank you guys
pandonov
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6 posted 2004-10-02 03:27 PM


thank you
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7 posted 2004-10-03 12:12 PM


Sometimes it is the only logical response...when you find yourself in the middle of the skid pan, it's time to skid.

Yo Steavenr -- you are so right. It's not necessary to understand Petre's writing at a cognitive level....part of you that you may not be aware of, understands perfectly. That's the draw.

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