Open Poetry #33 |
As We Become One And The Same |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * I am drawn towards your love Like a moth to a flame Love flows throughout my being As we become one and the same The passion within your kiss Lingers on my upturned mouth Feelings of deep desire Gently move from north to south As you move your body closer You whisper words of love so true Driven to the peaks of passion I declare my love for you You are my object of affection Our love will stand the test of time As I express my love for you Through these words of rhyme * * * "Love is the master of all ceremonies" - Sue Tancheff I am in motion |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sue And I thought I was always practising. Nice evocative read Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautiful as always, Sue. True romance. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and I bow to the Master of Ceremonies Love an enjoyable write, Sue! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Sue. Absolutely beautiful. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is sweet, beautiful and loving! Much enjoyed... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang You weave a gossamer web. Beautiful |
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