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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-09-25 07:12 PM



Finding - Promise – Keeping
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Finding
The perfect words
Expressing loving thoughts
Cherishing each moment with you
Knowing we are going forward in love
Looking back to where we have been
Seeing how far we’ve come
To where we are
Finding~

~Promise
Each day anew
Brimming with the beauty
That we always knew was right here
In the fulfillment of a dream come true
Sharing our all in keep of love
One heart-skip closer to
Finding our due
Promise~

~Keeping
Our love as fresh
As new dawn that lights day
Spending time to make memories
That will remain cherished foreverly
Entwined within the two of us
In perfect knit of love
Finding promise
Keeping~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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© Copyright 2004 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-09-25 08:20 PM


A model that we might all strive to find Marge...wonderful write.
TD

Martie
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2 posted 2004-09-25 08:22 PM


Marge/sis

You are both very lucky to have such a love!  I'm happy for you.

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3 posted 2004-09-25 09:56 PM


Dear Marge:

"Marge and Bill Foreverly!"  has a perfect ring to it!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Suetang
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4 posted 2004-09-25 10:35 PM


Marge

Your kind and loving heart shines brilliantly throughout.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Susan
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5 posted 2004-09-26 01:48 AM


Such love is inspiring and you've my great admiration -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Isobel
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6 posted 2004-09-26 04:42 AM


Dear Marge

A LOVE-ly POEM!

Love Isobel


Robert Joseph
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7 posted 2004-09-26 05:38 AM


Just as I remember...your words are warm and precious.

         Robert Joseph

Betty
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8 posted 2004-09-26 09:11 AM


This is so pretty. I hope you all are safe as I write this.
Love you,
Betty

Mon Cherie
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9 posted 2004-09-26 09:19 AM


I guess this are really the key things in building a life together with your loved one, right?

Finding each other, and finding out about the things that we both like...
Making a promise to yourself, and to each other, that you'll stay by his side no matter what...
And to Keep this promise...

Is that right?

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-09-26 09:41 AM


Marge,
Are you practicing to be an Angel? How did you make out with the hurricane? Hugs for the write.

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11 posted 2004-09-26 10:23 AM


Marge ~

I'm grinning from ear to ear to read of your happiness! May your love continue to grow and reach out and touch others through such inspired poetry!

Loveya!
EO

Muys
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12 posted 2004-09-26 04:12 PM



Oh my God
How Lovely is love
Huglets Muys

Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2004-09-26 05:23 PM


You know I am happy knowing you have found that special love and a very lovely way of expressing it this was.
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