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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-09-25 06:46 PM

Hawaiian Rain

Guam rain,
it soaks you
until you feel
like a wet rat,
and then it
gives you more
until you're feeling
like a fat wet cat.

Hawaiian rain,
it doesn't wet you
to the bone,
it just lightly
taps you on the shoulder,
gives you a soft Aloha kiss,
and then it leaves you alone.

JamesLee
September23
2004
Just some observations
after a recent trip
to Guam...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-09-25 08:42 PM

JamesMichael~
*sigh*
I like the very thought of this~

'Hawaiian rain,
it doesn't wet you
to the bone,
it just lightly
taps you on the shoulder,
gives you a soft Aloha kiss,
and then it leaves you alone'

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-09-25 08:57 PM

James

When I visited Maui I had one of those, raining on one side of the street and not on the other, experiences. Rain is wonderful there, like everything else! I enjoyed your poem and the memory it brought me.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-25 09:11 PM

I remember Hawaiian rain - you so captured that memory - enjoyed.