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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I see We love in simile A closer look reveals to me But I am not the one High waters I will shun Relationships the current strips been done I hear The heart in you beats clear A distant fear, I’m ever near But no, the surfaces I cling and so Too complicated, let me go There is no love inside to grow I call In favor of a free for all So hard to heal these shoals we stall A stream erodes the highest wall I see Pushed off the shores that hostage me A man’s allure in first degree Be fair yourself, don’t care for me I knew In every blessed part of you Much more than ever candled to This walk on water, pulling through I hear So strange that you would wait right here Too warm for me to hold you near So strange that I became this dear I see A closer look reveals to me We love in simile Copyright Kkh 9/25/04 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A beautiful treatment of the simile, Kathleen. You ever a treat to read. I enjoyed, as I always do.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Kiddo, Whazzup witcha? Like the words...you are flexing your Nom de Plume well.... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD You write the most equisite Stuff. Dave |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
Tender yet strong, liked this very much... E S West "always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Captured trying not to be captured .... or would that be captivated? So enjoyed this write. To love in simile is still love is it not? |
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