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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-27 07:59 AM


tiptoe water
no shoes trickle step
slippery rocks
under the evergreen

mischief is wrinkle nose
and finger ends
that play there
where the shadows shiver

sun closes her eyes
and pretends not to see
but through finger trees
she peeks and sighs

and has blush on her skin
it is too late to cover now
but my hands will try
in slow motion accidental

til she dances damp her dawn


____
Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-27-2004 09:04 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-27 09:31 AM


mischief is wrinkle nose
and finger ends
that play there
where the shadows shiver

sun closes her eyes
and pretends not to see
but through finger trees
she peeks and sighs


I think you ARE mischief defined Dark,
and I love how it lingers on the end of your pen.  Morning hugs.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-27 09:55 AM


Ooooh, Donna had such a good reply - yes Dark, you are mischief, and so delightful.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
3 posted 2004-09-27 10:28 AM


enjoyed
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-09-27 07:23 PM


It was a gorgeous dawn here as well...
enjoyed this, Sir.

Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
5 posted 2004-09-28 02:20 AM


you hide in subtle
but also manage to burst through.

Lovely poetry, Sir Stranger.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


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