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E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

0 posted 2004-09-27 02:54 PM

Atop a lofty craig, far is my view,
Of sky, mountain, and river blue.
There old memories flood into mind.
Questions answers, I need to find,
Watching my life play in review.

At first good thoughts parade anew,
Then dark issues begin to brew.
Too many, too fast, they're all entwined,
Atop a lofty craig, with thoughts astrew.

I close my eyes and think of you.
Of all the love we both once knew.
I know you were my life defined,
For naught can break this loving bind.
With heavy sigh, all thoughts withdrew,
Atop a lofty craig, far is my view.

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2004-09-27 03:01 PM

How very pretty. Sad, but pretty. I like the idea of being on the crag high above it all.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-09-27 03:04 PM

how beautiful...makes one know somehow that all things come to pass, full circle..and that in a spiritual realm of energey we will return...to a place undefinable.
To love with another's well being in mind, is the ultimate gift.

Fantastic write and a pleasure to read.

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

3 posted 2004-09-27 03:06 PM

thank you, it is a most beautiful and serene place, that I attend quite frequently, at least until winter sets in....when I get a new digital camera I will take some pics to share... E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-09-27 03:18 PM

Sky touched
Echoing
In a demand
We fly

Enjoyed your words

Dave

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-09-27 06:18 PM

Nice...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-27 09:18 PM

I love it!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-09-27 09:43 PM

I too once had a spot, upon rock cliff over looking valley - front of my property. I'd go there to think, to breathe, and to sing very off key tunes

Enjoyed this-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-09-27 10:18 PM

Sounds beautiful to me~

M

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