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Fall Pantoum
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Fall Pantoum |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
The noon-sun horizons at lesser degree, Both saddened and glad of the changing's Geese fly at night, not needing to see, The crux of the action, hides from meanings. * Both saddened and glad of the changing's Susan's weep seeds from fading black eyes, The crux of the action, hides from meanings Reflections in lakes, mirror clear blue skies. * Susan's weep seeds from fading black eyes Queens with sapphires, white, before freezing Reflections in lakes, mirror clear blue skies Summer-birds gather, soon they'll be leaving. * Queens with sapphires, white, before freezing Lingering moments in realms of sublimes Summer-birds gather, soon they'll be leaving The tropical day-star, empyreal shines. * Lingering moments in realms of sublimes I Gather kindling, light the night fire, The tropical day-star, empyreal shines Now only the snow-birds will sing in the choir. * I Gather kindling, light the night fire The noon-sun horizons at lesser degree Now only the snow-birds will sing in the choir, Geese fly at night, not needing to see. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Interesting read, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ford Yes, this is stunning!! Very well done in form and content! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had to stop after each stanza and re-read each one on the second run through to clearly see each visual, and it was worth it! Lovely! Oh, I miss Penn. so much may have to go back next year and park at Liz's, if not for the scenery, certainly Boston Chicken!  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
One word........Love It. Thank-you for the smile I really needed right now. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ice, you've shared the mood, colors, emotions, so very well. My little "gift" to you in thanks...taken just last evening...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
excellent Pantoum Ice, and perfectly executed! Enjoy the poetry, and form. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So very beautiful ...... and Karilea's picture goes so well with it. Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am in awe of the visuals you so aptly have created here, wonderful write...simply filled with warmth and tenderness Very much enjoyed...thank you bunches |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ford~ I fall into your word-passages ... feather light they are~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...EXQUISITE... ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is exquisite! I shall tuck this one away for future enjoyment. |
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