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Open Poetry #33

Pursuit and Peel Back Shores

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-09-24 07:42 PM

Poised before a soundless sea
In crashing waves that cease to be
And all is still within your eyes
Reflecting depths of soul surprise

Your breath upon my neck outlines
Each curved indent the moist defines
These slender travels of your touch
Unbound of fears, and weary crutch

From here against the bold of you
A barely there glows gold as new
And we become the surf in time
Renewed and lavished each in rhyme

Not same or different to be said
When all concerns are put to bed
And free of harnessed hurt unfurls
Our true hearts home in trusts soft curls

The white of honor builds and breaks
In flood of passions shore it wakes
And waited wet, desire spills
Is given drink, our cup it fills

Unending and repeating braves
To gather us in loves welled waves
Too intimate to surf in vain
That draws our hearts in deep again

Copyright Kkh 9/24/04

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

1 posted 2004-09-24 08:04 PM

What beautiful flow this has, just sweeps me away. I truely enjoyed being caught in your poetic waves

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2004-09-24 08:05 PM

Tis the draw that we seek and the escape is never easy when the bond has been set. Beautifully versed and much enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-09-24 08:33 PM

gorgeous

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-09-24 08:40 PM

Unending and repeating braves
To gather us in loves welled waves
Too intimate to surf in vain
That draws our hearts in deep again

you take me out to sea , riding the depths
of your wonder

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-09-24 08:43 PM

I really like this

Dave

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