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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-09-24 06:47 PM



On the Other End of the Line

Her voice,
there
in my ear
swirling thoughts
entering
forgetting
yet knowing
it can't be,
it's just her voice.

Yet
the spirit is there,
the lilt
the memories
and I can see her face
as if it were yesterday
as I left my message
for my brother-in-law
who will keep her alive
even if only
there
on the other end
of the answering machine~~


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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MyHeartofShadows
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since 2004-09-04
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Hyattsville, MD
1 posted 2004-09-24 08:01 PM


I know this, I found a video tape and watched it over and over till I almost wore it out.  I was told by my favorite teenager I was being somewhat creepy, but so be it, that night I had a dream and she was real agin,  thanks for this and pleasant dreams
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-09-24 08:10 PM


thank you...my sister's voice is still there sounding healthy...and it always takes me by surprise when I call.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-25-2004 05:15 AM).]

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-24 08:37 PM



sim0riah
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4 posted 2004-09-24 08:46 PM


That is so thoughtful of him..

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-09-24 08:49 PM


Yes I can understand but I cant think of any words

Dave

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