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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-24 08:05 AM

lady water laughter
manhands of stone
tree skin with velvet
erectly aroused

some mountain poem
lays long legged there
under winter edge
lover tempting horizons

summer is tiptoes
tan on barely skin
leaving cloud doors open
when she hurries bye

seasons are shirt women
without buttons dancing
they bring the wind
for morning rides home

but only one ever leaves

_________

Dark
scribble note..this is just the changing of the seasons in a mountain area I visit....summer leaving and winter coming in..

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-24-2004 08:39 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-09-24 08:08 AM

Dark
And where does that leave you. LOL enjoyed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-09-24 08:28 AM

very sad...and a time for evaualtion perhaps...hugs and smiles

Morning Sunshine, Happy Friday!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2004-09-24 09:16 AM

serenity...
in ever present winds of change

you roll in everything you see
and then I feel it on me...

K

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-09-24 09:17 AM

It's a beautiful season,
you leave it sighing...

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2004-09-24 09:43 AM

"this is just the changing of the seasons in a mountain area I visit..."

hmmmmm ... seasons "changing" in mountainous areas ... I got it ... I think ... *wink*

Great write here dear friend, welcoming in the lovely Fall.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-09-24 10:42 AM

Ah Dark, only you can make the change of season such a sensuous happening - but then again, perhaps you've inspired me to give it a try. I absolutely love your word play, my friend.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2004-09-24 07:24 PM

Well versed in the lovlies of she
tamed not
nor will that ever be

Excellent penning sir as always

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-09-24 07:44 PM

Excellent write.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-09-24 08:39 PM

sigh

sigh

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-09-26 03:25 AM

your words often call to mind bukowski with a little leonard cohen, never been a fan of his music but greatly admire his lyrics/poetry as I do yours.

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