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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Mortal/spiritual or both Lending sensual ears Ravished bride of quietude Winters adieu Weaving warm still need New strength and foresight Lending flowery sweet Meltdowns A throne of soft song Kissing sea of natural shock Embarking face to face Pale cast of thoughts Countenance of breath serene Temperate comfort Angelic light welcomes Full twilight peaks May-time shuffle Dancing diamonds bright Silver-tipped leaflets sing Cool springs Bubbly eyes A fair hand squeeze Long lashes Flattering words Praying mantis In the parlor of glances Moments ornament & dream Plump dulcet hearts thumping Wishes dare to own Open poetry Whispers syrupy hellos All dressed up with Places to go Gentleness, love and trust Shyly smiles hello |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here - so many visions to enjoy -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
you pack a lot in a poem |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 enjoyed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Praying mantis In the parlor of glances That says a lot Dave |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This write of yours broke across my face, and I felt the smile warm me. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Lee. I hope all is well in your life. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You write prettier than a "I just wish I had the money" lady. In a quiet room As if it was baptism Ravished bride of quietude On a vision of ice Skating in furs To provoke Disney On ice Of chocolate covered centers mapping thin ice Meltdowns A throne of soft song Tasting sweet salt of tears Embarking face to face Pale cast of thoughts Countenance of breath serene Temperate comfort Angelic light welcomes Full twilight peaks May-time shuffle Dancing diamonds bright Silver-tipped leaflets sing Cool springs Bubbly eyes A fair hand squeeze Long lashes Flattering words Praying mantis In the parlor of glances Moments ornament & dream Plump dulcet hearts thumping Wishes dare to own Open poetry Whispers syrupy hellos All dressed up with Places to go Gentleness, love and trust Shyly smiles hello I still like this I think it is a goodey Dave |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ I feel a season struggle here, perhaps a longing for things warmer, physical and, or mental...and a need to distant the undeniable reality of short distance, in time, from where you want to be and where you are... Perhaps I am way off from your intent, but like so many of your poems, the shine of this one can be viewed from different angles, and its facet glare absorbed, by different eyes, in different tones. --------ice/ford ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thanks bunches for all of your replys, so nice of you to not only read, but to take time to comment. David, thank you again and again...smiles and hugs Ice...no, although I've always been sad to see summer leave...this is a positive write and exactly where I am now....and fond of this life...I've been very blessed, and saved many times....given chance after chance...and words could never describe, how very fortunate I've been. Not to mention, I've never been happier since I've found PIP...it is truthful and full of talent...eager to celebrate kindness and concern...and I ain't whistlin Dixie....smiles and hugs Many thanks to everyone here who makes up this fine house of artists. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fantastic as usual Lee...why is it your words seem to be what you want to read?..thank you.. Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
LeeJ I keep coming back to read this Dave |
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