The heart aches for .... (haiku)

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Open Poetry #33

The heart aches for .... (haiku)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2004-09-24 06:31 AM

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The heart aches for love

as the seed for fertile soil

both are meant to bloom

***

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-24 07:04 AM

An indispensable compilation of what actually
is all of nature…astounding opened soul beats which sooth the mind and credit our spirits....absolutely beautiful and very insightful observation....thank you!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-09-24 07:21 AM

Margherita...
Simply beautiful...
Loved the picture and the haiku.
I was also inspired by this same flower lately, so that added to the enjoyement of the read.
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-09-24 07:30 AM

even in the feign of dormancy
it is all around
when you open to it

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-09-24 08:24 AM

Margherita
A visual and mental delight.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-09-24 08:34 AM

Those flowers truly do look like crying hearts. May they, you ~ and your poetry! ~ forever blossom and bloom and receive the attention and love so richly deserved!

Sending lots of love to those flowers ~ and to you!
Linda

Alicia
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since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

6 posted 2004-09-24 09:24 AM

enjoyed your picture and your words, which are so importantly true.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-09-24 07:50 PM

So very well done. Delightful read.
TD

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

8 posted 2004-09-24 08:11 PM

I once told you should respond to a Haiku with a Haiku, so here goes.

Grow and bloom seedling
In fragrance and beauty be,
Then seed tomorrow.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-09-24 08:34 PM

just beautiful

you are good at these

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

10 posted 2004-09-24 08:41 PM

Your usual quality

My poor words in return

Dave

The flesh toils

sowing seed from a heart ache

to grow and blossom

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2004-09-25 03:10 AM

Thank you my dear Poet friends, I enjoyed your replies greatly.
Have a wonderful week-end!
Love and Joy.
Margherita

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