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Larry C
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0 posted 2004-09-24 01:55 AM



One More Time…Between the Lines
By Larry Chadwick
It's been a long time between the lines...


You greet me in the morning,

Let’s do that again
With a smile and a kiss.
Let’s do that again
I knew from the beginning,
Let’s do that again
I could get used to this.


Sometimes you call me during the day,

Let’s do that again
Just to say, “I love you."
Let’s do that again
Not only is it pleasant,
Let’s do that again
I like it when you do.


You sparkle with a smile,

Let’s do that again
When I bring flowers to you.
Let’s do that again
And read each loving note,
Let’s do that again
That is filled with love so true.


You ride with me for hours,

Let’s do that again
Whether on the motorcycle or in the car.
Let’s do that again
I am sure that you would go with me,
Let’s do that again
On a journey to the farthest star.


I remember the day it all began,

Let’s do that again
When we locked our hearts together.
Let’s do that again
Accomplished with a simple, “Yes I do.”
Let’s do that again
That was the beginning of forever.


September 23, 2004



If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
© Copyright 2004 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-09-24 01:58 AM


yes
and again and again and again and...
well, you get the picture


LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-09-24 06:25 AM


forever, smiling and sending hugs to you both
Margherita
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3 posted 2004-09-24 06:39 AM


Oh, this is sooooo lovely!

... and red is the color of passion ...

Love, Margherita

kaile
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4 posted 2004-09-24 09:20 AM


i like it when someone thinks out of the box and presents us with something wonderfully creative

this is one of those occasions!

thumbs up


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-09-24 09:23 AM


Larry C
Read good to me. Happy forever.

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2004-09-24 09:45 AM


Beautifully done, Larry.  This one made me a bit misty.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2004-09-24 12:54 PM


ya know, I just had a thought ... if it was that good and remains so .... "Why don't ya do that again?"  Wonderful write and very much worth the read.  
Susan
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8 posted 2004-09-24 02:46 PM


Oh my and complete sigh - what sweet love -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2004-09-24 02:49 PM



...Oh, I remember...

Copperbell
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10 posted 2004-09-24 04:24 PM


so precious...this one fills my mind with my own memories as well.  It's amazing how many times those who love can enjoy the same things over and over
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2004-09-24 06:58 PM


It's always between the lines...at least in my writes


M

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