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Just Love ll
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Just Love ll |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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Just Love ll Dream… Close your eyes to dream and I’ll come to you Feel… Feel the warmth of me next to you Hear… Hear me as I whisper words of desire Caress… Feel my fingers O’ so softly caress your skin Taste… Taste my lips as they meet your own. Within this heart you'll find love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This has the right doses of tenderness and passion. Beautifully done. Love, Margherita |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a nice piece. I wish I had someone that felt that way about me. Someone, somewhere in Michigan must be lucky. The person you wrote this about would probably love to read it. I would Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That was a ton of softness in a very few words that I hope hit the target. Really enjoyed this. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice and very subtle Dave |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
very dreamy:-) i like. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My sensual side enjoyed...James |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for the sweet and wonderful comments. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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