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Corinne
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0 posted 2004-08-29 10:59 PM


Get Well Card

Hope takes seed
in the fluff of a dandelion,

angle of flight
determined
by breath and breeze.

May it land,
feather-light
into your palm.

© Copyright 2004 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-08-29 11:15 PM


Oh, Corinne....how lovely!
wranx
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2 posted 2004-08-30 12:51 PM


I agree....a lovely wish.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-08-30 06:33 AM


Get Well, Thinking of You, Feel Better...

all of the above.

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4 posted 2004-08-30 08:38 AM


How very beautiful... and so needed by so many! *S*
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5 posted 2004-08-30 02:11 PM


nicely done ma'am..

the softer side of you is quite fetching...

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6 posted 2004-08-30 05:16 PM


absolutely stunning...of course, I always expect nothing less when I open one of your posts
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7 posted 2004-08-30 08:35 PM


Yes Cor.  I hope it always falls into the
palm of a hand deserving of such a tender
expression.  Your words speak very well of
such a moment.

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-08-31 03:56 AM



Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-08-31 09:20 AM


beautiful
Corinne
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10 posted 2004-08-31 01:57 PM


Thank you all for such warm, tender words. I've been wondering if I can send this someone who sorely needs some uplifting of spirit. I think I've got the courage now.




Corinne

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11 posted 2004-09-05 01:42 AM


Corinne -- this gentle whisper caught my eye.  It is lovely....and a definite keeper!   .......jo
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12 posted 2004-09-05 04:48 PM


This is absolutely beautiful Corinne.

I'm keeping it.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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13 posted 2004-09-26 03:28 AM


beautiful..
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14 posted 2004-09-26 11:57 AM


Like it - very deep subtle - a lot of captured ideas in a few words

dave

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