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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-09-22 10:52 PM

I would be the soul at rest
when the stars die out
words of a love song --
tender terms to fill
the chamber

yet --

      now I have only words
these: words

watching October slide
into her array of color
and dance in rain to
finer music

I am one, that always falls weak
when earth pulls  rain down
to meet the bends of rivers and roads
or spin the inner moons of earth
with simple pleasures of sand and salt
or wait for the echoes of deep

{should I dare touch the memory of blue--}

I looked for vases to fill
but the ache reminds me -April left
the aspens bending, begging for yellow

      still their leaves fall
and grace is among them
~
I wait like stone for the
moss of your hands
to lead me in  dance

~~**~~

{Greatly Inspired ..Muse Dedicated}

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-23 12:33 PM

Exquisite Lauren - simply exquisite.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2004-09-23 12:41 PM

Lauren,
Wonderful weave of nature and emotion. Yes indeed there is much between these lines and I think I saw your soul. How sweet it is.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-09-23 01:53 AM

amazing

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-09-23 11:53 AM

I'm with PassingShadows on this one.

:-)

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-09-23 01:58 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-09-23 02:23 PM

GreenEyes~
You hang word-moss in the trees and it sways with elegance~
Lovely ... AS ALWAYS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-09-23 02:46 PM

not only do I read between the lines...
I SEE...
beautiful writing dear L~

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-09-23 02:48 PM

Beautiful this..
Beautiful you....
Love ya lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2004-09-23 05:50 PM

lovely writing as always, Lauren

M

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

10 posted 2004-09-23 07:30 PM

So many seasons ago, I was the epitome of you.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2004-09-23 07:45 PM

Oh my, Lauren. This is so beautiful.
It is absolutely breathtaking.
Hugs, sweet lady
Ethel

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2004-09-23 10:31 PM

Have I told you lately just how lovely you truly are?

If not then shame on me.

Your mother should have named you Grace.

But then, smile, I named my daughter Lauren too...her middle name, but still she has grace as well.

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