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Aerial Photographs |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Apart from the obvious signs, that were many growing thick below eye level untended instincts mistaken for anxieties ripe for weeding out no-one suspected and least of all, I. There was nothing written in words or in your still-smiles and I could not draw enough of that landscape and languages felt in a sun that had shone over so many other conversations than ours. Maybe it was that first dazzle of early summer sun, that danced you before my eyes long after the day is over an afterimage of a part of you kneeling upon unsalvageable grounds grounds, that I love even now. I never would have guessed Aerial views would be so perfect despite the grave endings that meant losing touch with so many shades of green. A patchwork of seperate lives, has never been so beautiful. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You amaze me. With your lucid style that never lacks emotion--AND? lady? laughing now YOU WROTE MY POEM a friend turned me onto this site and hey, I'm weird and like strange sorta stuff, but I fell in love with aerial photography: http://www.terraserver-usa.com/image.aspx?t=1&s=14&x=236&y=1124&z=11&w=1 You leave me amazed, shaking my head, and glad, very glad you wrote it instead of me. I'd have just rhymed mountains or some such nonsense... grin enjoyed lady |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello sweet Gemma. It's so good to read your beautiful work. I hope you are doing good. Heart hugs to you, my friend Ethel Mae  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a picture dear Gemma... excellent write. TD PS...Thank you for your encouragement... Appreciate it very much. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Gemma! Very much enjoyed this bedtime read. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
never cease to blow me away, good luck with the move and have fun |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ah geez....meant to comment on this earlier, but got all distracted by Karen's link. Love the poem Gemma! Truly! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Geez, and I'm sorry I was a distraction! I was just kind of freaked in the moment, gem...one of those synchronicity thangs, and I dunno why, but they still delight and startle me! I'll try to behave in the future. This poem is striking in its construction, just like as apparent as the title conveys. Warmest regards, and my apologies for the added link - I just get so excited sometimes.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I must've accidently forgotten to post a comment, because I remember reading this. I wanted to tell you how wonderful this is, as with all your writings, I feel I can relate to you. It helps. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Maybe it was that first dazzle of early summer sun, that danced you before my eyes long after the day is over A patchwork of seperate lives, has never been so beautiful. Just love the images here Gem, It's always a pleasure to read you. It's a  Maree  Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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