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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-09-22 02:43 PM


From the quietude of earth,
Awakened by coyotes
Came a young man, thirtyish, long hair
With bearded olive skin
Standing over 10 feet tall

Reaching inside my mind with
Impulsive no easy answers
Throwing truthful coins…
Despite my youthful freckles
As he spoke of mints of gold
From scarcely provided courses
But by the breath of twilight
Wearing winter’s haunting air

Happy to see me
Throwing arms around my neck
I could not say what time it was
Only that, bare trees left in
Rivers of light, like white unicorns
Tumbling though darkness
Into my window of childhood

Stubborn pointed eyes were
Tapping sensations in windless air
Whispering strange words
Something forgotten, that was once familiar
With swaying elbows and drunken music
Following with sure feet

Right to the top of Mt. Everest he leaped
Knowing certain, weather patterns before me
Writing life on the plate of each morning
Where the sky hangs on golden hinges
Dropping toward the sea

Serving water ice with hot tamales
Lamps of little words burned in my mouth
Walking with me in that moonlight
Being mine by heritage

The wondering child of artless gales
Shutting out all noise
Freely the young lover melted me
By the woman of my very soul
Whose maybe wasted every shot
Yet, always struck a bulls eye

Converting her losses to golden exchange
You never miss what you haven’t named
Now seas wink at the bright-haired flames
Of each day and I’m forever molested by
This warmth…ahhhh hem…in a nice way


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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-09-22 03:08 PM


Lee

It is almost as if a serene lady has just taken her socks off to come out fighting.

POSH with a capital "Port Out Starbord Home" meets "Genghis Cohen the Trucker".

Hope you dont mind the humour.

Dave

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