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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-16 04:47 PM


Jangling rhymths echo something moving yes heaven
On the roof and the hoof and the lights
Steam rising vapour tributes around the floor

I am going out dancing
Yellow coat on
Men at the door know of a hot dog going
Got my coat on
Yellow

Tricks on the far bar
Feet on the floor
Coat to the DJs
Going dancing
For an early bird

Flying dancing swirling twisting

Yes

dave


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E S West
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1 posted 2004-09-16 05:31 PM


sounds like fun, haven't danced in years...
well done.....E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-16 10:15 PM


I never do it locally

Cirencester is the base, so I dance in Manchester, Halifax when there, else it is the talk of the local supermaket.

regards

Dave

Susan
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3 posted 2004-09-17 12:44 PM


Flying dancing swirling twisting

Yes


Me too!  This is what I like to do

Susan

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LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-09-17 07:20 AM


I know this is going to sound amiss, and yet, what came to mind while reading this was fly fishing...now before you laugh, have you ever watched the art?  The line dancing in the air, back and forth...to a rhythum of breeze music, the whipping sound...twisting, and then, plop, the faint sound of the lure hitting water?  

Wonderful write, even though your intent was not what I've described here, you have certainly inspired me...

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-09-22 02:46 PM


Susan

You decadent Susan

Thanks

dave


LeeJ

Lee who am I to complain.

Dave

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