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My Love For You
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My Love For You |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Promises broken hearts spoken nothing really matters as you are painted in my memory. The rain falls hard agaisnt my window plain as I day dream about your smile. All the while I see you in my dreams... Touturing me as I miss you with every breath I take. Roses bloom they grow and fall to the grown unlike my love for you it will always be forever coming alive. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed the imagery here, especially of the rose growing and then dying in opposition to that of the increase of your love.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very strong emotions paint this heartfelf picture..thanks for sharing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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