Open Poetry #33 |
Knots |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Knots 62 years ago today my ma and pa wedded ya know, I really do believe their love lasted even though the marriage didn’t they’d just tied too many knots between them to find their way back home one thing all must concede I’m a product of their love not merely of their passion ©July 8, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes indeed. Interesting concept, knots. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Retrospection... a good thing... honesty another... Well done, Virginia |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
one thing all must concede I’m a product of their love not merely of their passion what wisdom behind this insightful stanza. you introduced a new line of thought for me... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
YES, powerfully embraced....wonderfully write! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virginia, you could not have said this more clearly or honestly. You certainly are a product of their love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I guess there are reasons for all things |
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